"Grey, elemental affinity, zero" The Elder announced the result loudly
On hearing this, it was like a bolt of lightning struck Grey, he stood there dumbfounded and just stared at the Elder.
Shocked voices could be heard from the people and there was some which were also filled with scorn.
Grey stood dazed amidst all the noises without any reactions. One word was constantly reverberating in his head, 'How?'.
'Why, why did this happen to me?' Grey asked himself over and over again
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Unbeknownst to Grey, something greater lies in wait in his body....
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P.S: When I started this book I had zero writing experience, so the first chapters aren't that great, although, my writing quality has improved over time. Also, English isn't my first language, so there are some instances where my choice of words are not good enough for what I'm trying to portray. A heads up, the book will be using a medieval setting. My world building is not the best, but it gets better over time, so bear with me on the early chapters!
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To quote one of my favourite novel: "The plot is so predictable it's the top result of Google."
It has specifically no harem so I assume there is still one girl the MC hits up, right? Or did the author mean no romance?
When will the new chapters be out?
wait so I thought at begining friends were kinda bad cause mc will just out grow them as talent can grow but that seems to not be the case? and they stick with him the whole novel? like how? dead weight? or stupid random power ups? mc gives them power ups? author? legit how?
I'm currently at chapter 246. Please give me motivation to continue reading as I am in the verge of giving up😭
continuation of my earlier comment…Spoiler Alert klaus… ik his character is supposed to be that way but man he irritates me so much. like okay you’re the “fun guy” of the group. we get it but would it kill you to not say bullshit every time you open your mouth? and alice’s whole persona is based on two things- 1) she likes fighting and beating people up and 2) threatens to beat people up.
i feel like just to add comic relief to the story the author has made the characters really dumb. like there are jokes and many situations that are supposed to be funny but i’m just finding them hella annoying. there are many situations where i’m just cringing at what’s happening. (i’m at ch 200) i like the underlying plot and the concept of the cultivation system but this could srsly be so much better if the characters were a bit smarter and the cliche jokes would be less. also i gotta mention smth i found annoying Spoiler Alert there’s a situation where the mc doesn’t kill some ppl because “he’s not in the mood to kill. ” like what?! and he doesn’t even know why and his frnds just accept it like “oh it happens sometimes” srsly?!!
Is there FL in the story If there is when will she appear
No Harem? I'm out
Can anyone explain the cultivation levels without spoilers