Astral Pet Store (WN)

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List of reviews made by users for the Astral Pet Store (WN) novel.

96 users have written reviews for the Astral Pet Store (WN) novel and rated it with an average score of 4.1 out of 5. Our novel is ranked 125th among all the novels in the Light Novel Pub platform.

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Train_your_brain 11
Chapter 1 yesterday
(3.0)

5 points about this novel >I liked the concept of it ( i like beast companion novels ) >Story was nor good nor bad it was average but it was really repetitive >World building was quite good in it >Author just forgets everything ( hope he is ok in real life ) >It becomes more of a cultivation novel later on and MC just stops using his pets

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CMWVR_786 5
Chapter 1581 one month ago
(4.0)

As this was the first novel i read it has a special place in my heart. What first enticed me to read was the pet aspect ( fan of Pokémon). Now the early stages of the story i like the aspect of pet store and the introduction of the system and the people slowly recognizing the MC talent and his pets. Now there were elements of frustration with some characters who constantly did and said the most stupid of stuff, the arrogant young master type. As it introduced newer places and the wider scope of the story's universe it had really good fight scenes but a bit repetitive. The author did well by not just getting stronger and rarer pets every time a newer and stronger place was reviled but instead grew his pets alongside him. He did get pets throughout the story but nothing stupid. This helps engage the reader and help progress with the MC. a quick breakdown would be: good fights, good attempt and showing emotion and especially describing the pets auras. Story semi repetitive. Annoying background 3rd rate villains, not always. Its not a masterpiece in the way the plot is laid out with excellent wording and beautiful writing. The story concept is great and your missing out.

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Iac 27
Chapter 183 2 months ago
(1.0)

The novel is hot garbage. Here's a short list of why it sucks because I don't feel like putting together a well-written review right now. - Copies pokemon - Dysfunctional Mc - The author excells at writing hateable characters - Small arcs are stretched. A pet rescue arc will turn into a survival journey. - Not story focused. If a good story's plot consists of a thick stick with small branches here and there. This novel is a thin stick with unending branches. Basically, the novel drags. - The novel makes you hate it. There's no enjoyment since the author splashes you with bitterness right after fun parts. - The novel is the type that allows death courters to flee scot free. - The author has dementia levels of memory - Over reliance on "chat" dialogue - More milk than a dairy warehouse Conclusion: It's bad. 1 Stars.

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LemonSquash 3
Chapter 1581 2 months ago
(4.0)

Amazing story. . . finished the whole thing in a few days. The story feels a bit rushed in the end but it's understandable, the world building was excellent so was the lore. I feel some of the Trump cards were left out but it's fine

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  • CMWVR_786 5

    a few days???? D*mn really

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Hunter_Jack 2
Chapter 1274 2 months ago
(2.0)

I registered and waited for three days, just to write this review. . . The ONLY worth thing in this novel is it's concept. The concept is extraordinary, therefore it much more feels like an amateur author stole a beautiful concept and then destroyed it to their liking. There are no character development whatsoever. In the name of character development the author just made them (little) stronger without any reason. Overall I am p*ss*d that an amateur author butchered a beautiful concept that could have gave birth to multiple successful novels

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Evure 8
Chapter 1566 3 months ago
(4.0)

the concept of this novel is great and original. I had fun reading it. although the author could have done a much better job at writing this, still the story is great.

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MeowZeHong 11
Chapter 264 3 months ago
(4.0)

This is a solid novel, by the description and start it seems incredibly similar to the novel “Fey Evolution Merchant”, just with fewer chapters, which had me very concerned. Luckily the novel goes in a different direction. The writing is just fine and the plot isn’t bad either. This novel isn’t full of emotionally deep story and relationships, or dark plot and serious struggle, but it is a relaxed read, and you can tell the author is having fun doing what they want. Give it a read and see if it’s your thing.

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GrandSageHoo 3
Chapter 1092 3 months ago
(1.0)

First time i felt like i had to do this. READ AT YOUR OWN BRAIN'S PERIL 1) Author is gonna retcon or outright forget details of the story to fit the current narrative or drama he's forcing to happen 2) 80% of the drama here feels so contrived 3) MC is a hypocritical, antihero wannabe and author is an enabler defending the MC; twisting the details in the narration to make it sound like it's the most reasonable or righteous thing to do.

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boreddd 3
Chapter 1581 3 months ago
(5.0)

Truly an enjoyable experience. Im thankful i didn't listen to the comments and not read this. Loved every aspect of it. I would suggest that no one listens to the comments and give the book a try, they won't regret it.

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BlackPhantam 12
Chapter 1581 4 months ago
(4.0)

Honestly this story wasn’t the best it had a lot of plot holes and retcons and the main character contradicted himself a lot but over all I enjoyed the ending even if the story didn’t make a lot of sense

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