Demon Immortal

Like another review said there is way too many words that don't add any additional value. Saying a character is scary because of his scheming and position does not require a whole chapter. Also the MC discovering his true self and deciding he was acting against his nature stops having meaning if it happens every 20 chapters. I feel like the author had a book idea and concept for a book, but his execution leaves something to be desired. I do hope he improves though as the book has potential to be a decent cultivation novel maybe even coming close to Journey of the fate-destroying emperor.

Bland with a lot of yapping. . . almost every "paragraph" could be said in a sentence. (it's like giving details about the detail's detail's, which can be great but most of the time its unnecessary and makes readers skim/not want to read. ) There are a few great chapters but they are heavily overshadowed by many of the lackluster ones. Maybe once the "introduction" or volume 1 is complete will this story shine but so far its a drag. (150 chapters in)

In first 50 chapters, there are several groups beside MC. In many chapters, author jump from one group to another to MC. IMO, while reading it is not pleasant. One of the reason for my three start is because of the way that author explain the event. Other than that the story is like other CNs, MC finds opportunities and goes toward immortality. The power system is not that unique.

very good novel about cultivation everything is there for a good cultivation novel a cool way to cultivate who change from the usual way of sitting down and waiting 10 years to go up one realm nice side character big scheme with huge repercussion a MC a bit crazy , ruthless and fun and very cool figth and wolrd building and also the most important no harem wich his good . i recommend really a good novel

One of the best cultivation stories I've ever read extremely fun to read it gives you that feeling of not wanting to read it and keep going until the end to see the outcome I recommend it to everyone who Like cultivation novel read this from here

First review? Les go. Now that i have started the Record of A Mortal's Journey to lotsa karam pointsa mario! I realise how many novels i read. I guess i should try for this one and stop waffling or it def wont get approved. . . The story starts off well, the concept of cultivation (because as you might have guessed, this isa cultivation novel) is clearly explained and introduced with certain clarity. The author , surprisingly, (for my assumed evaluation of how new he is at writing) uses show, not tell rather well. The character dialogue and slowly fading comedy with a certain immature seriousness that is gradually introduced makes this a great teen novel. The concept is with great potential as well. But there are caveats. The slow update time, the potential the author is on haiatus (please tell me if im wrong) cause its been over like 3 or 4 months since an update (dont remember). The worldbuilding has greater potential but is executed very averagely. (ok, maybe the fact the entire time i read the novel i was imagining a section of a valorant map didnt help) and the nature of the world is undefined. the central idea of the great 'demon immortal' becomes more mundane the more you look at it. Although that can be remedied, (the author could learn from birth of the demonic sword) and that leads to a burnout from the author prob. Unless he has a will of iron. Hey, it's still in its beggining. And its truly too early to criticise it. So give it a try. It might update, it might not.