How To Live As A Writer In A Fantasy World

The story is 8/10, the secondary characters are 7/10, but the main character is 2/10. He's literally older than his siblings but behaves like a child. I thought he would improve over time but he remains the same. He doesn't see his flaws or try to fix them. I know the main character is weak, but he doesn't make an effort to improve even though he's in a fantasy world where strength matters a lot. He doesn't have to be strong, but not even trying is annoying."

Most of the time, you'll feel like you're in the middle of someone else's conversation without a real beginning. Writing is hard to follow since it jumps around from scene to scene without logical connections or context clues quite a bit. MC will be complaining or explaining something to himself in his head directly at the reader in a 4th wall break while scenes with unidentified speakers play out in the background before pausing his rant and looking at something taking place in front of him and start describing it. Translation seems janky in the strangest places like they took a literal meaning for a Korean euphemism instead of using an equivalent analogy. You'll get kicked out of any sense of immersion every few hundred words since it's confusing as to where they are in the world, timeline of the story, or characters within the scene at any given moment.

For a story I picked up on a random whim; due to finishing too many stories. This is actually really well written and has a lot more character depth and plot design than I expected. 10/10 for interesting characters. 10/10 interested plot line for a generic fantasy setting. Definitely worth reading the first 15 Chapters. I'm currently on Chapter 157 and I can't wait to see how the story continues to develop.

Can someone tell how big the harem will be because I can’t stand harems with 10+ people

If you want a MC who only knows how to fight or is a manipulator, definitely do not read this novel because it is not for you.When I saw the harem tag in the novel, I thought that it would be a very difficult harem like the classic Korean novels and that MC was an *d**t who did not know how to deal with women, so I didn't want to read it but I decided to give it a chance and I'm glad I did, it was a really different style and novel, I liked it very much.

Hope he ads a new character in his book that is unique maybe with his old name ore something like that he should be someone who does this cultivation think and was isekaid randomly. He should be merciless and strong and not resemble issak in personality but in Background. He should also say something to his girlfriend's like" there will be a new character that resembles me a bit"

MC is too much , scaredy cat , timid , weak , powerless ... story with soo much potential , but kinda wasted bcz of MC personality , hope he changes and grows , needs some serious development or the story will get boring fast

Very early chapters started really strong, sadly the attitude of the protagonist makes the story go downhill extremely fast, as many others commented before, he is quite spineless. Just to elaborate a bit more in that aspect, no he is no cautious or insecure, he is just a very soft character that has no idea how to act, I could actually buy this premise if the MC was a pampered noble guy that never experimented the world and from there he starts to develop. As I said at the beginning, started strong, really funny and went bad fast.

Looks interesting. Reading this cuz I'm bored

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