Story of The Ancient Demon King!

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List of reviews made by users for the Story of The Ancient Demon King! novel.

5 users have written reviews for the Story of The Ancient Demon King! novel and rated it with an average score of 4.0 out of 5. Our novel is ranked 1052nd among all the novels in the Light Novel Pub platform.

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HaveABread 6
Chapter n/a 11 months ago
(4.0)

The concept is pretty similar to Eminence in Shadow, except the comedy is lacking a bit. The harem is also lacking despite the harem tags. Story wise is a 4/5. Read this only if you don't have any other novels to read.

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I_Need_KP_ 3
Chapter n/a 11 months ago
(5.0)

loved it, the way it just kept homing me while in the feels, it brought a stream of tears sometimes and the plot and story move smoothly with well written fights and was extremely captivating

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1AndOnlyReader 13
Chapter n/a 11 months ago
(4.0)

Not that bad, but also not that good. . A good read only if you have nothing to read. . it's one of those novel just to make yourself have something to read. .

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VIOLE 23
Chapter n/a 11 months ago
(3.0)

Story wise, this is of the same vein as Cid's story but the comedy is lacking compared to Cid's. What I have enjoyed so far is the lack of harem scenes although harem tag can be seen. As long as you know the story of Eminence in the Shadows, you can enjoy this story. If we're talking about the story alone, I would give this a good 3 star

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leo2740 4
Chapter n/a 11 months ago
(4.0)

A super fast paced high fantasy comedy webnovel. I had read only a couple of chapters of this webnovel but I already have so many opinions about this. I should start with the things I like the most--which is fewer than the things I don't like. I enjoyed the plot. It is decent and pretty interesting. The subplots are what making me wanted to progress through the story. The translation is fine. I like the heroines of this webnovel; I enjoyed thoroughly their povs. They do lack some depth but compared to the other 80% Japanese webnovels/lightnovels I'd read in the past, these heroines are already better. Let's move on to the things that I don't like--though I've already stated one above. I should start of how confusing the prose is. It's very telly; I can't picture what's happening clearly, and their movements are dull. It really bugs me when I was reading this, and sometimes you would see an adjective that should'nt be there--though I can't tell whether it's the translator or the author. I think the number one thing that the readers would notice after reading a couple of chapters is the very fast pacing. It's okay to have a very fast paced story but in this webnovel, there are a lot of things missing, hence it gets very confusing. Tone of this story doesn't work for me. I think the author is trying to mix comedic and serious based on its prose and povs. They are trying to mix the two of those together but it sometimes becomes a mess and thus making it feels insincere. This gave me a vibe similar to a Light Novel I'd read before, and it feels like the author is trying to achieve that but it did not work. First person perspective and third person omniscient is the two perspectives in this novel. The first person is decent while the third person omniscient feels lacking. Like I said earlier, it is very telly, but for some reason, the third person became a tiny bit less telly but it did not take advantage over the pov. so is it worth reading ? kinda yes, it passes bare minimum standard

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