The Great Demon System
The Great Demon System

The Great Demon System

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The Great Demon System novel is a popular light novel covering Fantasy, and Action genres. Written by the Author Drip. 287 chapters have been translated and translations of other chapters are in progress.

Summary

In a world filled with abilities and superpowers, Moby Kane, a 16-year-old boy, is an orphan who is living his life with a little too much optimism, trying his best to get by.

Due to him having no ability, he had been bullied and tortured every day. However, for some odd reason, he never complained and always stayed happy no matter what. It was almost unnatural.

On one cruel day of immense pain, he realized that the world is a brutal, unforgiving place, making him regain his lost senses.

In his moment of desperation, a miracle happened.

[ You have unlocked the Demon System ]

Now that Moby has the power to change his cruel destiny, how will he use it to get back at the world that wronged him on the road to becoming the demon lord...

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IMPORTANT MESSAGE TO NEW READERS! PLEASE READ!

My first few chapters' writing quality is very bad and lackluster but gets much better as the novel progresses!

Also, the first 5 chaps are kinda similar to vamp system but the story and settings differentiate after that into their own thing past that point! Hope you stick around! :)

Quick note! many people in the world are cruel and almost psychotic but there is a good narrative reason for that, it will be explained later on in the novel I promise! :D
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  • lnwUser33373
    Reader

    Yo question here . When does the necromancer get betrayed by Abby ?

    7 days ago 1 Likes
  • Crimson101
    Reader

    You know what, my guess is that author wants us to show sympathy towards our pathetic MC in the beginning and then praise him like 'feeling of 1000 suns burning his enemy alive' shit.....all he did gain from his 'demon system' is a bit of common sense and nothing else worth mentioning.....but still it is a bit interesting to read. Probably.

    12 days ago 0 Likes
  • VatVat
    Reader

    Not bad, one of the best i have read

    13 days ago 0 Likes
  • Shadow456
    Reader

    Too disgusting for me. When they said ruthless, I was not expecting THAT ruthless.....

    16 days ago 1 Likes
  • Silex
    Reader

    I have read some stupid shit my my life but nothing comes close to this.👍👍

    17 days ago 3 Likes
  • Zer0Moxxi
    Reader

    I’m disgusting but god I enjoy this so much. I want to be him and do the messed up things he did.

    18 days ago 0 Likes
    • RedCurtain
      Reader

      I understand...The Dark Side is in our Blood

      13 days ago 1 Likes
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  • Silex
    Reader

    I'm a fan of this, the writing isn't the best but it's pretty good. If u want something to pass the time I would recommend.

    19 days ago 1 Likes
  • NoLifeSteve
    Reader

    I've read some messed up stuff before but....... I warn you skip chapter 106 - 110. Or you'll wish you could ctrl+z yourself

    21 days ago 1 Likes
  • NovelGlutton
    Reader

    I dropped this bs when I realized how poorly written it is in the first few chapters. I started reading The Legendary Mechanic (rank#3) instead and it's been so much better. I'll probably trust in the popularity ranking from now on.

    22 days ago 2 Likes
    • Etymo
      Reader

      In the summary of this novel, it clearly stated that the first few chapters were written poorly so I don't understand ur problem? whatever, imma head back to read

      22 days ago 1 Likes
    • NovelGlutton
      Reader

      Tell me when the "poorly written" chapters end and I'll come back to read this.

      22 days ago 0 Likes
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  • Anothereader
    Reader

    Moby dick :) also poetry

    24 days ago 0 Likes

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Ruintaker

I liked the story bit but did yall ignore the poor girl getting raped by zombies and why is he so emo but that was a bit overboard and the friend too and I hate the fact that he just pulled out the demon system to make people follow him and this novel is not my cup of tea.

lnwUser52666

I love how you’ve written your novel please continue this till the end and a promise of 3 or even 4 a day could put you ahead of many others it will be stressful but worth it for like events every now and then

Harbor_of_Bone

This story relies on the dark plot-line to stay interesting and the characters are pretty one dimensional. Its still a pleasant read but If you don’t enjoy main characters who are designed for the sole purpose of being villainous do yourself a favor and look elsewhere

LiquidC

most people are relating this to MVS and yes its really similar because they are both crap, this novels mc is actual garbage because he is to open with the one thing that could kill him and the author makes him a emo brat that's only objective is killing someone and that isn't a problem when its done right. not only is the mc turbosh*t the story isn't even that good coupled with the terrible descriptions you have this novel... a walking piece of sh*t

Lking

Great novel Has a character bulding process it not complicated and haa a great plot.The Author is also a great guy. He as a amazing imagination for writing. If he keeps working hard he will become an excellent writer one day.

CeRes

I read 30 chapters. Mc is a big emo and makes me cringe. I am not against villain protagonists but this one is not done well. Unless anyone can tell me when(and if) the writing improves, I'm going to drop it.

Zenitsu

Don't believe the others saying that it's a copy of the vampire system it'll just look like that for the first 2-3 chapters after it'll be totally different

BlueJayBeautie

Starts off sounding exactly like My Vampire System... Like exactly and intentionally too (*Cough Cough* ERIC QUINN *Cough* [Quinn Talen being the protag of MVS iydk]), The differences are Protag is evil and is trying to kill everyone. While it may be aiming to be cathartic for those who suffer it fells more like gore smut. I don't feel good reading this at all. No Thank You

UsernameUnavailable

People compare this too much to mvs(my vampire system) there are similarities in only the system and household stuff. The rest is nowhere close. Mc became ruthless from chapter like 5 while that mc from mvs is still a good kid despite all the betrayal and fighting hes been through. His best friend betrayed him 2 times and he still forgave him... Thats something like 40 chapters in if i remember right.

The mc here however is completely ruthless. His system is helping him become a true demon king. Cold, merciless cruel etc...

Imo the story is great. Its the exact type of mc i need. Albeit hes sometimes a little naive it would be stranger if he wasnt after all hes still a kid lol.

FallenLeaf

MC is the most stupid person i have ever seen.. he gets a "demon" system but act like a 9yrs old.. how he easily reveals his card and make "friends " with others knowing that this may put him into situations... and then he decides to teach others too... wow so caring mc for so called "Demon"... and his system doesn't even act like a demon...