Primordial 'Dual Cultivator' Dragon With System

I liked this part and to think that she was the trigger. Are you surprised to see me still alive now?" "How can you still be alive? You should have died in that ravine!" Chen Hong asked as he stared at Ling Yun with narrowed eyes. "Honestly, I feel grateful to you for ordering your men to dump me in that ravine back then, and I am here now because of that. " Suddenly, Ling Yun took out the Chaos Dragon Broadsword and pointed it forward, and his gaze turned cold. "However, the current me now is not the old me, and I will get revenge on you today. " Chen Hong snorted, took out his long sword, and pointed it at Ling Yun. you haven't been a cultivator for long, so you can never defeat me, let alone kill me. Since you didn't die that day, I'll kill you with my hands today, and I'll get Wen Qing back later. " Due to his arrogance, Chen Hong did not even ask about Ling Yun's true identity and looking down on him.

*Story Quality: Mid I've read a lot of sm*t cultivation light novels and this is pretty average for the genre. It hits all the usual story beats, and spends slightly more time progressing the plot than it does with the s*x scenes. Comparatively, I've read some stories whose plot has a LOT more potential, but development is dragged into the mud by the s*x scenes. So at least this average plot is steadily developed. *Writing Quality: Mid. I'm excluding grammer and spelling on the account that English is not the author's first language. What I really care about is whether the writing is engaging or not, and in that regard its pretty basic. *Romance: low. MC's got 50+ women now, which means the story has no time to develop relationships between them and the MC. Each girl is just another pin for the MC's vest. PokemonMax+ *S*x: low. It's quite repetitive: v*g*n*l, *n*l, and BJs only. At the begining the author had some k*nky girl-on-girl play during threesomes with the MC, but later on the author dropped that and made all the women sexually interact with only the MC. Now the author doesn't even go into much detail with his scenes. The only k*nky factor left is the *nc*st, and even that has hit the back burners in recent chapters.

I mean it's not all that bad, it's not for me but I don't get all the hate? Sure some Grammar mistakes here and there, but that won't kill you. . . Just fill in said "Grammer Mistakes" in your Head. This Novel could be a whole lot better. But doesn't deserve all the hate atleast IMO. If you're thinking about reading this give it a Taste. You might like it. Just don't look at the rest of the Reviews 💀 or comments😭

In the beginning it was fine, the romance flowed smoothly. But at a certain point he added so many women that I don't remember half of the MC's harem. It's a little tiring but the romance is more or less.

So far so good although some of it is questionable it's still not toxic enough to make me stop reading I'm in chapter37 let's be honest it feels lacking like I was reading some facts text without emotion evoking words and sentence but I'll give this 3 as it doesn't deserve to be 1 because the author is working hard

look, I'll be very honest, this work is of very low quality, so if you are a morally upright person or are looking for an average or high quality read then this work is not for you, you can try reading the s*x scenes are not very good ones too, so be warned, and I stopped reading at chapter 10, if you are a person who likes reading this kind of trashy work with a lot of s*x, *nc*st etc then maybe you will like it anyway I won't stay here cursing for hinder the experience of those who enjoy the work so goodbye my noble companions, see you in other soap operas

I dint understand why it has a 2 star rating but is not bad at all, yea the names are hard to remember but thats it. At first when i saw this novel i was turned off by the rating so I didn’t read it but after taking a break from my other novels i was reading i gave it a try and it is pretty good. If you are new to this website do not trust the reviews or the ratings at all, i had the exact same experience with “dragon monarch system” which is also pretty good but had a terrible rating

Pretty weak storyline, read until 30 chapters. Weak plot to go on, mc is just a puppet to the system. Wish it was a little better written. Not recommended

Note: I have read til ch 47 before the reset happened, don't come hounding me that I am criticizing without reading it. Note 2: the only reason I had even read it was to spite someone who trashtalked me for judging this to be bad without reading it, personally, even unto my worst enemies would I not force them to read this. Of course, for those that still remember and could find my reviews should know I don't just say stuff is bad like every bad reviewer out there, I do constructive criticism. Let us begin. World building: generic, take any cultivation novel that takes place on "earth" and take away all the logic, that's the world building, the system and cultivation are basically just excuses for the author to write smut and incest. Character design and development: What's that? The author took time to design and write a development plan for the characters? Hell nah. He just took the basic stereotyped character templates and used those, only, they are like play-dough, their personality just gets warped all over the place for the sake of "plot". Plot(intricacy, continuity, understandability, enjoyability): The most predictable plot ever, I said it before, but it got deleted by the reset, but I could predict the entire plot from the synopsis and tags alone. Story telling, spelling, grammar, vocabulary, readability, translation: Shit, it is absolute shit. If you have read machine translations, this is basically that, only, just a little, just a very little bit better. To get an idea, just read the first paragraph of the first chapter. I could off the top of my head write 10 different variations that are much better for imagination, fluidity of reading, and less cringe. The R18 plot: no, just, no. It's incest, incest everywhere, fk the mom, the aunt, the sister, fk everything. Even if you want to ignore all the bad points I have said and read it just for the r18 scenes, I recommend you don't, because all the r18 scenes are short, simple sentences of the actions, there's barely any descriptions that can spark your imagination to visualize what is happening, and the sex is basically just, I have big dick, lemme wave my big dick so you moan in pleasure, yes, it's so big(sarcastic voice). Hence I personally think the author is just some horny 12 year old, even when I just started writing I could do better than this. Extra commentary: What the damned hell is this mc, he wakes up after getting beat up to a loli sucking his dick and is like, oh, ok, anyways. Extra commentary 2: For those here for the system tag, well, that system basically just exists to progress the shitty plot, it would have been so much better if the system was part of the plot, plus the rewards and stuff from the system are just so random and clearly just aimed to make the mc ridiculously strong for no good reason. The only positive thing I can say about this novel is, this is just so bad it is probably the worst novel I have ever read, considering I have read thousands of novels, this is an achievement in itself.

This one uhhh. . . There are a few disclaimers before you can try to give it a read. It's EXTREMELY clichè. You will probably be able to predict the entire thing without much issues. There is SEVERE Incest. I won't express myself on that premise, if ur interested, sure. System is there, and its prompts are actually what I like the most in the novel, hence the 4 stars. If ur into System novels and care about nothing else, then you should read this. If everything I've said managed to still retain your interest, 100% try it.