Re: Apocalypse Game

I really enjoyed this book as a binge read. I thought the idea of it was pretty interesting at first. I like the game and power design. The MC is fairly realistic and doesn’t have insane plot armor. I’m excited to read future chapters!

This book is intresting, and has distinct pros and cons to it. The book does lack some flavour and is quite bland at time, along with characters that don't add much, some chapters drag on. However there is some intresting action scenes and a relitively unique take on skills, the Mc shows some intelegence, but other characters and cliches sometimes take away from it. The book does branch slightly from traditional regression novels. Overall i would give the book a 4 out of 5 if the author didn't bring so many racial stereotypes into it, adding in different ethnicities for the sole perpose of brining in stereotypes ruins the immersion so i have to give the novel 3.

A nice novel with a realist as the MC. Though it is a sci-fi type (with splattering of fantasy I am hooked. I guess the only thing I don't like about this the slow updates.

Writing as of chapter 112. This story is pass. Nothing to outstanding or unique. Typical regression story at the moment most of the fights are with guns and grenades. It might change in future chapters

7/10, its not that crazy I mean if the author had great writing skills, with the plot it would be a great novel. The plot is nice but over all it pretty hmm how should I explain it doesn't catch me that much. You know I need some twist or what ever. I know he regressed and knows everything but at some point something should happen and for 120 to only play 2 games and it isn't finished its to slow, eventhough there is a lot of action but some of it is unnecessary. PS I gave it 4 stars because there isn't 3. 5 I didn't want it to downgrade, bcs I really liked the plot

Ight it’s been a while since I have written reviews so I kinda forgot how my usual structure is, I’ll start with the plot. Plot: 3-4/5. Take the cliche regressor type story, make is less flashy, more grounded, down to earth, and that is basically it. There are minor inconsistencies but nothing major so far. The world building: 3/5. I cannot make an accurate judgement as there isn’t much to judge on, not much is explained either about the workings, logic and reasoning behind the games. However as it isn’t completely out of orbit doing wonky stuff where the author goes from one idea to the next, causing major inconsistencies, it gets a 3, for now. Character design and development: 5/5. Well defined, consistent characters, the main characters are each their own being with their own personality, and secondary characters have a brain(thank god), there has not been enough room for extensive character development, which is also more realistic considering quite a large amount of the characters are 20-30(or a regressor) where their personalities are already more developed and rigid. Writing(pacing, grammar, vocabulary): 4-5/5. It is fairly decent, vocabulary use is also great, not too simple, nor overly done, there is also not many repetitive words for certain actions, grammar is also decent. The pacing is slow. The writing style, while not bad, can definitely improve a lot for describing action sequences, right now even some scenarios that are exciting feel a little bland. I would not recommend it to others, but I would also not dissuade anyone who wants to read it. Again, emphasis, the story progresses slowly, and with the writing style, for those used to action packed novels filled with excitement, it would be boring for the most part.